Marco Mongan
Tuesday, December 20, 2011
2nd 16 bars to what I wrote awhile ago.....?
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I liked this one better than the first verse, don't get me wrong the first was good but this was really good...9/10 I"d say based on emotion and rhyme scheme (no repeat words) do you have a hook yet?
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